Takes Two to Tango

let me dance 

the song of desire

across your aqueous

trembling

quivering

shivering

pink treasure

chest of the seas

its pearl 

glaring, moistened

to a shine 

with undivided 

attention

to a pleasure's commission

embrace the thawed lust

meltable Melanie

gentle feathers 

dark, hard and prickled chocolate

stiffened her bulging circular bust

open your carved-to-perfection

Autumn-blessed legs like

a sun-burnt sea

and a slave to Summer

let me follow through

with what my c**t begs

from you

up, down, rotational slide

my pulse in a thrash of a beating

this passion never died

you had me at a first class greeting

carve me with your needy nails

help me put out

these raging fires

I want to be

what your body desires

Reviews

[cilla]

This poem is simply beautiful. Elegant and graceful framed in a series of natural imagery this poems reads so smoothly aloud ... lyrical pillow talk to
be shared with a lover.

"let me follow through
with what my c**t begs
from you"

I love these three lines. The use of the word c**t when used in a poem often feels awkward or harsh but it is right at home here. It conveys the carnal need as it has evolved. And finally ...

"I want to be
what your heart desires"

And isn't that what we all want? Again, this is gorgeous work and for those of us who work at writing the love/erotic poetry it is a fine lesson in style.

Cilla

[Keith]

I loved the pacing you threw into this. It added a rhythmic feel to it that reminded me of.... well you know.
Well done, Alpris

[MoriartyMesa]

Are you offering free shots of Whiskey, or say Nitro, cause this had a nice Blast to it.

[Michael G.]

Okay, the warning label wasn't enough. This needs a fire extinguisher to go along with the reading.
Beautifully written and the flow is brilliant.
Without question... you were quite inspired to write this.