Cheese.

Cheese.

A Poem by Aly
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Another hole had been punched through me.
How could I stand so much pain?
I felt as though I was a piece of Swiss cheese;
Riddled through with holes.
He left me when I needed him most.
How could he?
Was I just a worthless toy?
Had I served my purpose of entertaining once?
I would never know, for he was gone.

© 2009 Aly


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seriously, you need no crititque, but Im not really good with that stuff anyway. I must admit, when I saw the title I was like WTH, but it seems better then I thought it would be, very great job once again.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 11, 2009
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Aly
Aly

Brisbane, Australia



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Im Aly. Im awesome. Im in grade eight. I love my friends ♥ Jacula Jordan ♥ 6 Months ♥ Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :( I love you guys ♥ Kthx.. more..

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A Poem by Aly