With wings.

With wings.

A Poem by Aly
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With wings,
She flies to an open place,
Up in the sky
Where she couldn’t be hurt any more
She was invincible here
Strong.
Nothing could bring her down.
Nothing at all.
Not the memories of her former life,
The memories of the pain.
Nothing.

© 2009 Aly


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This is another great short one, but can i suggest you adding another little bit to the middle...like a reflection on her pain or something. Just a thought!

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Added on January 11, 2009
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Aly
Aly

Brisbane, Australia



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Im Aly. Im awesome. Im in grade eight. I love my friends ♥ Jacula Jordan ♥ 6 Months ♥ Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :( I love you guys ♥ Kthx.. more..

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A Poem by Aly