Winter.

Winter.

A Poem by Aly
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I stared out over the cold winters night.
I am alone.
Completely and utterly alone.
Alone in this empty world;
In this empty room.
There is no-one here.
No-one anywhere.
Just me and the cold winters night.

© 2009 Aly


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Well expressed... those cold winter nights can make you feel even ore isolated then you even are... short and straight to the point. Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


this is nice and simple with enough imagery and emotion. great.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on February 7, 2009

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Aly
Aly

Brisbane, Australia



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Im Aly. Im awesome. Im in grade eight. I love my friends ♥ Jacula Jordan ♥ 6 Months ♥ Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :( I love you guys ♥ Kthx.. more..

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A Poem by Aly