Beneath the great unknown

Beneath the great unknown

A Poem by Alyana from Love Paper Pen
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This poem was inspired by a night full of stars.

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There’s something special about gazing at the stars
No light pollution, city noise or cars


We smile as we get lost beneath the great unknown
No interruptions, no reception on our phone


The midnight chill dominates the air
The conversation’s steaming, feet are bare


We lie beneath the studded sky
Talking about what ifs and whys


We ponder about what the future holds
While the worlds greatest show, in front of us unfolds


Our ears are tuned into the ocean
And just like that, worry becomes a silly notion


I see the universe reflecting in your eyes
Childish, beautiful yet wise


Today we found a new dimension
A place of wonder, kindness, and intention


This moment we will forever own
A king and queen under the stars
swinging on their throne


With love, Alyana

© 2018 Alyana from Love Paper Pen


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Oh, I love this! It is stunning, serene and peaceful! I couldn’t agree more with you, that a still, quiet night neath the stars is more potent with vivid life than anything electronic that buzzes and creates too much static in our lives and removes the humanity from us instead. I love that line about the childish beautiful wise look at the universe and the person you’re with. Refreshing write and perspective! Lovely!! X

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alyana from Love Paper Pen

6 Years Ago

Thank you for such lovely words my new friend. Means the world.
Alexa Apothic Red

6 Years Ago

You’re so welcome, new friend! Enjoy your evening!



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Great rhyme scheme, and even better theme! I thought this was tied together very well. I find inspiration in similar settings.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alyana from Love Paper Pen

6 Years Ago

Thank you dear
Oh, I love this! It is stunning, serene and peaceful! I couldn’t agree more with you, that a still, quiet night neath the stars is more potent with vivid life than anything electronic that buzzes and creates too much static in our lives and removes the humanity from us instead. I love that line about the childish beautiful wise look at the universe and the person you’re with. Refreshing write and perspective! Lovely!! X

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alyana from Love Paper Pen

6 Years Ago

Thank you for such lovely words my new friend. Means the world.
Alexa Apothic Red

6 Years Ago

You’re so welcome, new friend! Enjoy your evening!

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Added on April 26, 2018
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Tags: poem, poetry, stars, stargazing, nature, nature lover, beauty, universe, lovers

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Alyana from Love Paper Pen
Alyana from Love Paper Pen

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My name is Alyana, I am a poet, a writer and a never tiring advocate for love. I share my thoughts in written form on my blog - Love Paper Pen. I started blogging because I felt that the world could .. more..

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