A Sight Well Seen

A Sight Well Seen

A Poem by Alysha
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Thoughts of my favorite animal and my imagination ran wild that day.

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Upon the timeless mountain top;

I found a gem that made me stop.

Within the mountains highest mound;

There is a treasure to be found.

It's beauty is beyond compare;

A better sight I know not where.

Hills of white;

Valleys of green.

A mist so light;

Hiding things unseen.

A pack breaks through the sentient trees;

The alfa is stopped by what he sees.

He stands there staring, expectingly, at me;

He stares at me so, I don't know what to be.

My mind thinks frightened;

But my joy is only heightened.

His coat is rustled in a cleansing wind;

And I let loose a wild grin.

The alfa's timeless eyes gleam;

A better experience then what it may seem.

He turns to leave me behind;

Thoughts are racing through my mind.

Upon the wind drifts a joyful cry;

A sound so wonderful I could fly.

I'm here to tell of my journey;

Of finding the path that brought me to my knee.

© 2010 Alysha


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You speak of the animal with such majesty and apparently you are just as brilliant and bold as the wolf as the converstation with eyes tells...great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


cool poem! isnt as dark as most of your works. I wanna see that!

Posted 12 Years Ago


oooh, i like this... great use of descriptors throughout the poem: 'timeless eyes', 'sentient trees', 'cleansing wind' -- all of those are very unique and add to the kind of magical, one-of-a-kind moment the poem's about. i think the tone of this poem is very strong; there seems to be a wildness to it, which is especially prevalent when you get to the part about meeting the alpha... good job -- it reads aloud really well too :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice hun, very nice. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on May 17, 2010
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Tags: Wolves, animals, outdoors, mountains, love, beauty, inspiration

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Alysha
Alysha

San Diego, CA



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Hello everyone I am Alysha Raelene. I live a simple life with my husband we are experienceing the joys and pains of pregnancy at the moment and we're loving the chance. I love writing and all that go.. more..

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