Inception

This is my first attempt to write a Slam poem. It should be read aloud

Eighteen

world wont take me

serious, but its ok if you hate me

only God can judge

your hate wont rub

off onto my psyche,

you see cause I'm a pisces

I live inside this moment

but I can only hope that

the future is in my dreams

and nothing is what it seems

inception is my infection

thank you for your attention

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

Amanda, you give this such a fierce fire, a heart alive with light and emotive power. Stuns the mind and stirs the imagination. And just so you know, I take you very seriously. xo

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
Creative work, you made me smile. I know nothing of what a Pisces supposed to be like, but resilience came to my mind after reading your poem.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[KAin]

The world will seek to change us in many ways, but the best thing we could ever do is to be true to who and what we are.
Never compromise on your path, never compromise your way! Never turn away from the path you've chosen, no matter what people say.
When all the world tells you to move, you tell them, 'no, you move.'
It's the audacity to step forward, the audacity to be you! So long as you can be that, nothing else matters.
Good work, Amanda!

[MikeV]

Great write, i like how you threw
in your a pisces and described yourself :)

[Amanda]

Thank you!!

[zainul]

Eighteen is a great milestone of one's life.
You wrote a great piece.
Thanks for sharing.

[Amanda]

Thank you:)

[zainul]

You are most welcome,Amanda.:)

[BreannaAutumn]

Hah I love this short little poem:) it somewhat reminds me of my poem Never Give Up. I think it adds something to it that you put a bit of humor in it as well:) thank you for sharing

[Amanda]

Thank youu I'll read your's!

[BreannaAutumn]

haha thanks!:)

[BreannaAutumn]

oop I'm sorry I renamed it a while ago its called Fates Map

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Its bad the world blinds us all in many ways forms and fashion, What really matters is what do you see within yourself! That is what counts the most. I agree with what is wrote Let God be the Judge! I love those moments :) I live and breath for them so yeah! ( but I can only hope that the future is in my dreams and nothing is what it seems) I relate perfect to that we all do. Well I am just 1 speaking and me being here I take you serious! So thank you Amanda for sharing:)

[Amanda]

Thank you Jon! You're so deep

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Your welcome Amanda :) See now when it comes to this im not clouded lol idk my try to figure it out ha ha! But yeah I am pretty deep will admit that. Its like having the cant help it moments and idk that makes any sense lol. But yeah im me in a nut shell!