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A Poem by Amata Luna
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On random feelings... random thoughts

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Thank You.
Thank You.
Thank You.
A thrice of "thank You's" for a thousand pains
for in that pain, I became utterly strong.

*

Solitary is a writer's life,
Lonely is a writer's heart,
Lively is a writer's mind
But a writer's soul is looking for something,
Someone to understand
that even though life is exciting,
Maybe somehow,
just deep inside
Someone's really hurting...

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I miss the heights of the mountain hills
When I am down, frustrated and in chills,
I'll shout my heart and break in tears
Then after that, I'll have no fears

I hope all places are like hills,
I hope all people are easy to please,
I hope my heart is kinder and big,
Maybe I'll be better, maybe I'll be best.

© 2012 Amata Luna


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The second stanza of your poem is really just perfect.
I dont know if anyone can decsribe a writer better than you did.
I've loved it and i've felt it.
Wow you're incredible

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love that last stanza, it really brings this whole piece home! I also love the second stanza, I kept reading it over and over!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice flow

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 7, 2012
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Amata Luna
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