Hark Now

Hark Now

A Poem by Amata Luna
"

Hear God and he will listen to you

"
Consume that which destroys you
Burn up those that deter you
Hinder those that derails you
Into the will and purposes that God has given you

The time to act is not tomorrow
The time to move is not next day
The time to see is not for a year
But the day is now, the day is near

So hear the word and see it dear
Do what you heard and make it clear
Turn unto God and learn again
He is the answer to everything

© 2012 Amata Luna


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Critique:
- line 3, 'derails' should be 'derail'; "Hinder those..." that's a plural for the verb 'derail'
- line 3, 'that' should be 'who' since you refer to people rather than things.

Other than that... nicely done and voiced.

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Doc.
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Posted 5 Years Ago


I love this poem. It's so inspiring. I especially the last line: "He is the answer to everything." So very true...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Amata Luna
Amata Luna

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I write when something brings me to it. I write when somebody pushes me into it. I write when things are sad and when things are not. I write when I'm inspired. To inspire, I write. To share is to wri.. more..

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A Poem by Amata Luna