Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5
NVR

NVR

A Poem by Amata Luna
"

never will I

"

Never will I listen to your mocks

Never will I be hurt by your flocks

Never will I believe all your lies

You never really loved me;

You just wanted what I have…

 

 


Amata Luna

© 2012 Amata Luna


Author's Note

Amata Luna
Just emotions... a passing one. I hope so... Wishing and hoping it so... One thing I always remember "the closest will pain you the BEST..." whew.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Short, emotional, beautiful. This poem makes an awesome quote! Nice write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intense emotions expressed through few words. Great job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong and direct words. I like them. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow i like it. It really lets us, the reader, into your mind to feel the emotion.
Short, sharp and painfull. Like an enjection of emotion. Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really! the closest ones are always the ones who hurt us the most...
Short and effective write! well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

174 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Added on February 12, 2012
Last Updated on February 12, 2012

Author

Amata Luna
Amata Luna

About
I write when something brings me to it. I write when somebody pushes me into it. I write when things are sad and when things are not. I write when I'm inspired. To inspire, I write. To share is to wri.. more..

Writing
promise promise

A Poem by Amata Luna



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Mirror Mirror

A Poem by Tamia123