Problème?

Is it I or not? My problem or what?

Y|our ???problème

 

Now here’s your problem

 Let me tell you something

You insist me doing;

I never even imagined such a thing

 

What’s your point?

Why are you sour?

Did I make my confession?

or should I still lie?

 

Have you found out the rhythm?

Did you find the melody?

See I have bound things with people

And danced them with harmony

 

Do I speak in riddles?

Or just tell my mind?

Your thinking is now morphed

Into a past long left behind

 

Is leaving necessary?

Is staying really sure?

Or you think me a dummy

That I can be easily lured?

 

Never mind my asking,

Never mind my style

One thing is for sure,

In you I will always have my eye

 

 

 

Amata Luna

Author's Note

Hello guys. Here again. The poem for the day: 4/16/2012. It's random. Pertaining to no other but "me" (I hope I can believe that, really. =D) and how sometimes I let this mind work like insane. I can't use much more words to express things and I hope you'll get things that lie underneath each word. For those who will read, review and rate it, my many thanks to you in advance. Until the next word is penned down then... :D

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

still unpredictable
=]

[Lizzy]

I like it, free to different interpretations. I love how it's random. Good job!

[Thea]

Wow...This was totally amazing, Amata...I loved each and every part of this poem especially the simplicity of the rhyme scheme...Wonderful work!
:)))

[Eve Brown]

This was really good. :)

[Ellen Brook]

Cool! 10 on 10 for this piece of work! Two thumbs up!!

[Suditi]

Tres bien! :D


Do I speak in riddles?
Or just tell my mind?
Your thinking is now morphed
Into a past long left behind

My favorite para!

Great work. :D