Scarred

Scars are amazing; they heal with the future and yet reminds you of the past...

Scarred

Her tears fell

Her knees even fail

Her hands are frail

And her mind seem to sail

 

Away she smiled

Alone she cried

She even tried

And everyone took her pride

 

She wanted to be loved

She was hated instead

She wanted appreciation

She got rejection in place

 

She wanted to do something

But nothing can be done

Fate had ordained things coming

And what they did is just none

 

Her heart was so scarred

It ceased on bleeding

Her mind was so beaten

It cannot be straightened

 

Sanity left her side

Love deserted her lonely bride

Failure followed at her heels

And the world is ever silent to her pleas

 

 

 

Amata Luna

 

 

 

Author's Note

The poem for the day. Thanks for those who'll read, review and rate this one. It's pretty inspired by one line. =D Enjoy reading. ;)

Reviews

[Shelley Warner]

Thank you for sharing. It made me think of an elderly woman who regrets lost opportunities and starts to lose her grip.

[CHRIS ANDES]

well, a great poem for the day
=]

[Lizzy]

I can relate to this poem right now. I love the momentary pauses when I read it. Beautiful.

[Desmund Tiny]

I can feel the pain in this poem.... I love it... great work

[daydreamer]

I love your font selection and presentation of the poetry. All the emotions have been portrayed in a lyrical and cynical manner:)

[Dark Poetry]

I love it, trully appreciate and love it.

[Thea]

This poem speaks nothing but mere honesty...Scars might hurt a lot yet, it has those great lessons that we can learn from...A remarkable piece indeed...Excellent work, Amata!
:)))

[Suditi]

The last stanza is my favorite!
Its a nice poem.
The pain of that woman..bad luck in all the walks of life..
Its a beautifully crafted poem. Great job. :)