A Poem by Amata Luna

thoughts in random; bits of me though


I joke

When I’m mad,

I laugh

When I’m sad

I eat ice cream

When I cry

And purse my lips

Just to try

I hurt

Those closest to my heart

But only to see

Whether they’re for me or not

So if ever I hurt you

And you turn me away

One thing’s for sure:

You don’t love me enough to stay with me come what may



© 2012 Amata Luna

Author's Note

Amata Luna
Another random poem from a random writer. Just for the day. 5/1/2012

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Oh i love it!
The last few lines especially.
The entire poem is so real.
An amazing random piece :D

Posted 11 Years Ago

I stay with one who has hurt me a million times over. Am i devoted or just stupid? Either way great randomness from a random writer on just a day.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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This is so beautiful! So origianal an absolutely brilliant choice of words!
Very good indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago

hahaha... great write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on May 1, 2012
Last Updated on May 1, 2012
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Amata Luna
Amata Luna

I write when something brings me to it. I write when somebody pushes me into it. I write when things are sad and when things are not. I write when I'm inspired. To inspire, I write. To share is to wri.. more..

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A Poem by Amata Luna