She

She

A Poem by Amata Luna
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It's her best friend and worst enemy of all...

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She

 

Her chinky eyes is like honey

An expressive brown that looks lovely

But sometimes when I look her eyes are just lonely

Making me drawn to her more and more lately

 

She curves her mouth into a smile

She curls her hair in the index of her hand

She c***s her head when she doesn’t hear the sound

Oh how intriguing and lovely, how adoring and profound!

 

She speaks her mind that not everyone understand

She cries like a babe that she has to mute its sound

She fights like a feline who knows she will win

But she has ever been gentle to people and kin

 

No one understood her because they never tried

Not one made her their friend but for their hurt pride

She was the best to speak to herself and she alone

She made a point to live without having it shown

 

She’s been accused, she’s been redeemed

She’s been elated and sad she’s been

She’s been a gal, she’s been a babe,

She’s been a shrewd, but let’s not care

 

She saw the worst, even had her best

And that thought her a lesson

A lesson that just didn’t took place

It was her heart, still it is, it was her mind and ever is

 

Her beautiful eyes is like honey

But their expression is sad, never truly happy

But sometimes when I look her eyes are just lonely

I know and I know something is just there wrongly

 

She curves her mouth into a smile

But I saw her curl to hide her cries

She c***s her head when she doesn’t hear the sound

But nobody ever tried listen to her mind

 

She’s been the best, she’s seen the worst

She’s made herself the best for most

She can be the best, she can be the worst

But she is her worst enemy above most

 

 

 

Amata Luna

© 2012 Amata Luna


Author's Note

Amata Luna
I don't know if I sound what. :P I can't think of anything while writing this. I just write. Hahaha. I hope it make sense at least. I hope at least it has a sound. ;) It's for today's poem. 5/3/2012

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you are natural...
She’s been the best, she’s seen the worst
She’s made herself the best for most
She can be the best, she can be the worst
But she is her worst enemy above most..luved these lines..ur magician

Posted 7 Years Ago


i enjoyed it yeah some gramatical errors but who cares writing is about writing a really good work thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


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wow. This was so creative and expresful (is that a word?) it was a very good job.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Lovely write , expressive .

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like your expression in this piece. Sometimes we really are our own worst enemy. I like to relate to your writing :) Thank you for sharing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


The grammar and structure confused me a little, but I think I get the message and I liked it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lovely!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:) hahaha.. like it.. full rate for this :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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