Shards of Glass

Shards of Glass

A Poem by Amata Luna

Simple shards of glass...


Break not thou trust like a crystal in thy hands

Be careful not and in a grip ye’ll lose just like that

Once thee was broken to come back t’wil never be

But for most thou will have it, simple shards of glass...



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Never break one’s trust that’s like a crystal in your hand

Be careful not to lose your grip just like that

Once it is broken it can never be back

But for most you will have it, just shards of glass…

(as translated)       

Amata Luna

© 2012 Amata Luna

Author's Note

Amata Luna
I was thinking of making this into a long poem. But I don't want to rekindle the not-so good emotions. =D I made fragments and this one's just a part of it. I hope you'll enjoy this one. I can't clearly think though I'm inspired to write. I think that's what a sad heart does, it inspires you and impairs you the same.

As always,
AL, @5/13/2012 - 4:45 PM

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Reviews say it's a fragment yet if collide with rhymes proves that you're as good as new

Posted 11 Years Ago

i like the way you wrote it :) nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Nice poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago

The message is nicely conveyed, :)
We should value everybody's trust.
Gaining the trust of someone is hard but regaining the trust that's once lost is much harder.
thanks for sharing. keep writing! :)))

Posted 11 Years Ago

The message in this poem is so powerful and extremely true!
It's hard regaining trust one you've lost and broke it.
There's so much honesty in this poem.
Great work, Amata! Such a beautiful message you have in this piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago

beautiful write Amata. it expresses everything it has to. trust is indeed like glasss. like the simile there:)

Posted 11 Years Ago

this one expressed a very beautiful message... I love it.... great work!!~

Posted 11 Years Ago

:) you know amata! :) THIS IS GREAT!!! so super... eeeekkk! i love the way you express your poem.. the lines really enigma! :) and can i put your piece in my library? thanks :)
- Genie

Posted 11 Years Ago

Its a complete piece in its own.
A beautiful message, expressed beautifully.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on May 13, 2012
Last Updated on May 13, 2012
Tags: musings, life, friendship, realizations


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