Delay

Delay

A Poem by 李[A]
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For http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Short-Note/14265/, describing a lot of my moments. Just a short little representation of me and procrastination.

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For the past many years,
My mind told me to do everything.
Yet, here I am years later,
And all those everythings, are now nothings.

No matter how much I thought,
Or how much I cried,
Or how much I spoke my feelings,
Nothing came out from no action.

© 2011 李[A]


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This is an amazing Poem.I wouldn't change anything about it and it is more my style of poetry compared to one of the earlier ones I read.'No matter how much I thought,Or how much I cried,Or how much I spoke my feelings,Nothing came out from no action' That is the best part for me,you end it well and you keep the flow going from line to line.Fab write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great poem, and I'm sure everybody could relate. Procrastination always seems to sneak up on us, doesn't it? :P anyhoo, nice poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think your logic is supra-rational. Very philosophical and meaningful, I appreciate the wisdom behind these words. I am now a fan.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this a lot,describes what's hard to describe it seems like... love the second stanza. Really nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow this was short and kinda bitter sweat...I LOVED IT hahahah good job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an amazing Poem.I wouldn't change anything about it and it is more my style of poetry compared to one of the earlier ones I read.'No matter how much I thought,Or how much I cried,Or how much I spoke my feelings,Nothing came out from no action' That is the best part for me,you end it well and you keep the flow going from line to line.Fab write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very sad, it made me want to get up and accomplish something, this piece is inspiring in a way, so I'm going to do something tomorrow to honor the underlining message behind this work! again bravo!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 23, 2011
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Tags: Delay, Procrastination, Inhibition

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李[A]
李[A]

Somewhere, OH



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Hey! I'm A. (figure out the rest of the letters :P). Anyways, I'm a sixteen year old boy who normally doesn't write that much, but hey, I'm practicing vocabulary and writing skills at once so why not .. more..

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