Corner of the moon

Corner of the moon

A Poem by Mina
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This poem shows an example of what is considered Evil and Good but how do we know which side is fair ? After all, truth is subjective and deceiving.

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Looking at the earth from the corner of the moon,
Life shouting at the sounds of human breath,
Trees lifting at the feel of the dim light,

I was a devil,
Now an angel,
The creature in my blood stream preyed me up,

But love lured me,

The one eyed angel shadows,
It grunts, juggles,
And hunts
Never seen me dark before ?

I was devil,
Now an angel,

© 2013 Mina


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Imaginative and gorgeuos
i really like this peace

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank yuu im soo glad you reviewed my poem :)
ayosonolowo

8 Years Ago

You're welcome
I like the Poem Mina-remember to root it in earth first though-According to l bernstein? all in all a noteworthy poem. warmest wishes roy...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank You
Roy
Glad you reviewed my poem :)
Looking at the earth from the corner of the moon, 
Life shouting at the sounds of human breath


great poem Mina :))
short nd mysterious

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank you soo much :)
imaginative, mysterious and gorgeous. I loved your poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank yu soo much :)
annabellee

8 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
"love lured me,

The one eyed angel shadows,
It grunts, juggles,
And hunts "
A very interesting poem and a different angle or edge...Wonderful...:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mina

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Your reviews mean a lot !
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)

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Mina
Mina

Gravesend, kent, United Kingdom



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