Flabbergasted

Flabbergasted

A Poem by The Flawed

 

I thought I was flying,
I was falling,
I thought she was hot,
She was fire,
And her touch was the finest thing that I never knew.

© 2009 The Flawed


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firstly.. the title is one of my fave words
*smiles*
and the final line grips the heart and gives a rather painful twist..

wonderful evocative tiny write

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply nice. Short, but right to the point. Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a very deep write... short but alot of meaning behind your words... very nicely done!!! overall a very impressive piece!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it, but TWIRLED is still bossing my mind. This one feels like a warm up for the much stronger poem. But I still like it. The other poem I love as it is a full on tumble of surreal backflips.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very nice.. Great job..

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

very intense...short and beautiful

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This was a very beautiful little piece

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 17, 2009
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