Sociopath

Sociopath

A Poem by AmongSavages
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Pretty self explanatory... This is loosely based on truth

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Sociopath


A sociopath

That’s what you are

 

You don’t know how to feel

The emotions of others have no effect on you

No matter how raw

 

I’ve cried

I’ve seethed

And your expression remains cold

 

Cold heart

Cold hands

Cold soul

 

Not once

Have I seen pain in your eyes

Not once

Have I seen shame

 

Emotionless

Expressionless

Cold hearted

Sociopath

© 2013 AmongSavages


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AmongSavages
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I like this concept of describing a sociopath, but, in my mind, it is not as easy for the sociopath as one would think. They cannot hold normal loving relationships, they usually find themselves in trouble because of their lack of remorse and have no real place in society.....I think the poem has more to say. I loved the rhythm, it speaks aloud well. Words like "emotionless" and "expressionless" don't sit well with me, though....even a face that never moves is an expression in and of itself, thin cold lips that sit in a straight line, and maybe something about the eyes and what emptiness lies there......nice writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AmongSavages

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your feedback. The poem isn't really supposed to be the description of a sociopath. It.. read more
AmongSavages

9 Years Ago

Glad*



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This is pretty late and months overdue, but this isn't my opinion of a true sociopath. I know what a sociopath is, I've read about plenty, I'm into all of that good stuff. This poem is about my experience with someone who labelled himself as a sociopath and how he treated me at times. This is in no way supposed to be what I think a sociopath is.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I think reading some memoirs of those deemed a sociopath would greatly deepen your understanding od their inner mind. What you are describing seems too safe and obvious. It's cool that you're looking at a risky subject & trying it out. But a little more research may help!

:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this..the expression is great.. For me my family could cause anyone to become one so idk ..lol..x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AmongSavages

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much ^^ ..they can cause anyone to go..numb?
Lily Mae

9 Years Ago

For sure.. I know it to be true..xo ;)
I like this concept of describing a sociopath, but, in my mind, it is not as easy for the sociopath as one would think. They cannot hold normal loving relationships, they usually find themselves in trouble because of their lack of remorse and have no real place in society.....I think the poem has more to say. I loved the rhythm, it speaks aloud well. Words like "emotionless" and "expressionless" don't sit well with me, though....even a face that never moves is an expression in and of itself, thin cold lips that sit in a straight line, and maybe something about the eyes and what emptiness lies there......nice writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AmongSavages

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your feedback. The poem isn't really supposed to be the description of a sociopath. It.. read more
AmongSavages

9 Years Ago

Glad*

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Added on February 16, 2013
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