Love in a Song

Love in a Song

A Poem by AmongSavages

Makin my way downtown'
Click.
'It's a quarter after one I'm all--'
Static.
'Won't you stay with me..'
Thoughts.
Well he is all I need.
But it is love
It's clear to see.
But for some reason
He won't
Stay with me.

Keep thinking, girl.
The Northern Downpour girl.
Yelling at the moon.
Begging it to forget
To fall.
Because if it falls,
He falls.
Because he's her moon.
And she's his sun.
And if she sets
If she burns out
What light through yonder window
Will break through the dark side of his moon?

I have to be the light.
I need to be the sun.
Whether or not he blinks back
To let me know
That he's my moon,
Waiting for us to be golden after all.

© 2014 AmongSavages


Author's Note

AmongSavages
Constructive criticism welcome!
It's still kind of a rough draft.

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Love the beginning. Creative song idea! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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