Love in a Song

Makin my way downtown'

Click.

'It's a quarter after one I'm all--'

Static.

'Won't you stay with me..'

Thoughts.

Well he is all I need.

But it is love

It's clear to see.

But for some reason

He won't

Stay with me.

Keep thinking, girl.

The Northern Downpour girl.

Yelling at the moon.

Begging it to forget

To fall.

Because if it falls,

He falls.

Because he's her moon.

And she's his sun.

And if she sets

If she burns out

What light through yonder window

Will break through the dark side of his moon?

I have to be the light.

I need to be the sun.

Whether or not he blinks back

To let me know

That he's my moon,

Waiting for us to be golden after all.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism welcome!
It's still kind of a rough draft.

Reviews

[Leslie]

Love the beginning. Creative song idea! :)