Befriending with- Pains !

I saw you frowning

So,

asked “What happened?
Why in pain, you are?”

I got bemused to know

Your reply...

of

Having less money

For the weekend

To spend

To acquire what on earth ; his heart wish to...

Taken aback to pay attention my buddy!

And his heart-rending pain,
I smiled (in a sardonic way)
What a gigantic pain !
That he was tormented from,

Thought,

Your ordeals differ

As per who you are…

 

For me

My pain lies in My Heart.
It cuffs me

Regardless of hours of daylight and darkness

My Heart,
Is the basis for this anguish

I feel…

 

Whenever I get suffered
it aches
and coerces my eyes to spin tough and red,
oblige these droplets to flow…

 
I can’t articulate this pain to you
‘Because I am addicted to them
sometime it distressed me and says

“How could you endure us?”

If my pain was not with me,
I question,

I wonder,

My heart would have stood lonesome!

Amrita "Ams"

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good questions raised by this poem. From the beginning question to the strong ending.
"For me
My pain lies in My Heart.
It cuffs me
Regardless of hours of daylight and darkness"
Many ways to look at life. Each of us want more or less. I guess we must find something to create a spark in a life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[R J Askew]

Great title. Understanding such pains means we understand ourselves more.

[Lively]

Loved it!

[sivan]

very interesting poem... different and good

[Amila Jay]

Excellent poem:)

[TheSweet]

The broken grammar in this piece really makes it for me. It stands out as if it's something special. On the second to last stanza, you haven't put an end to the inverted comma - not sure if that's intentional. other than that - befriending with pains sums it up rather well :) Thanks for sharing.

[hopelessromantic]

i love it it is a great write

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Blew my mind- Phenomenal- :)