Too Many Shadows

Too Many Shadows

A Poem by Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
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Look behind you....when you are feeling down, I'll be that shadow to help carry you through the night.

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Night approaches
my room of
gloom
 
Shall I open one
eye to see what
is on the wall?
 
Standing alone
I must decide
what to do
 
Scary shadow
on my wall
please go
 
Wait... maybe
not...maybe
stay a while
 
Show me your
spirit of the
night
 
I will be your
friend because
after all....
 
We can never
Have…
 
Too many shadows.
 
 

© 2008 Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"


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interesting way to look at it. I am often frightened by the shadows rather than comforted by them. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is kind of eerie, but in a good way. We all have shadows, inside and out. As for whether we can never had too many shadows, I'll have to think about that one!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That was a well thought out concept potrayed in a excellent way, of course. I loved how one can find company in mere shadows when no one;s around. You;ve given a very vivid, descriptive and realistic account of someone as such.
The flow was smooth, very smooth in fact. The word choice was great....
I really enjpyed it!!
WELL WRITTEN!!! GREAT JOB!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"

Bright souls have no certain destination and the moon got lost last night



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Do we really have to "tell all" for one to be a friend? I am not like most of the writers here at the cafe. I have not been writing for very long and actually started only a short time ago after my .. more..

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