Too Many Shadows

Look behind you....when you are feeling down, I'll be that shadow to help carry you through the night.

 

 

Night approaches

my room of

gloom

 

Shall I open one

eye to see what

is on the wall?

 

Standing alone

I must decide

what to do

 

Scary shadow

on my wall

please go

 

Wait... maybe

not...maybe

stay a while

 

Show me your

spirit of the

night

 

I will be your

friend because

after all....

 

We can never

Have…

 

Too many shadows.

 

 

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

interesting way to look at it. I am often frightened by the shadows rather than comforted by them. Nicely done.

[jakelsen]

This is kind of eerie, but in a good way. We all have shadows, inside and out. As for whether we can never had too many shadows, I'll have to think about that one!

[Enigma]

That was a well thought out concept potrayed in a excellent way, of course. I loved how one can find company in mere shadows when no one;s around. You;ve given a very vivid, descriptive and realistic account of someone as such.
The flow was smooth, very smooth in fact. The word choice was great....
I really enjpyed it!!
WELL WRITTEN!!! GREAT JOB!!!