Run

Run

A Poem by Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
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Slowly I pick my pace up....

"

 

Walking slowly, I turn
only to look back
where I began
 
Nervous inside I try to
think why I left my
comfort zone
 
Always staying inside
the lines, I never
questioned life
 
Opening one eye at
a time, I realize
life goes on
 
My pulse races as
my pace turns to
a slow jog
 
Passing beautiful
horizons I've never
seen before
 
Wonderful faces
smile as I stroll
them by
 
Journeys around
every corner
excite me
 
Glancing down,
I notice no more
walking
 
....RUN

© 2008 Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"


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I am a jogger on and off, mostly in warm weather, but this one reminds me of the nice rhythmic pace and once in a while I feel like a deer and have to sprint for life.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love the flow... the wording but most of all the positivity. The intoxicity of feeling that revival of life and spirt.
Beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The pace and the imagery are consistent, the words pound out a beat that matches the theme. Another good piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Moreover, it now describes what I am feeling and what I am experiencing now. Nice job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


the rush of life as it floods the senses. Beautifully written

Posted 11 Years Ago


This made for a wonderful read. I love the flowing feel of this as it carried like the wind or a soft whisper in my ear. I think this was so perfectly written as it gave a reader such a vivid image of something more than just words on a page. I love the connection I could feel to it.


Great Job!!!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow! nice poem. it describes me in some time of my life. Hahaha!!!
Good work. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"

Bright souls have no certain destination and the moon got lost last night



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