Her Song

Her Song

A Poem by Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
"

We all have a song of our own....What key of life shall we sing in?

"

 

Little girl afraid to write,
scared to look into
the night
 
Shadows cast a sign
of doom, why must
she die
 
Far from earth, she
she cries as she falls
from grace
 
 
No one to hear
her lonely heart
beating...
 
Bring forth the
Key to open
Her eyes
 
Take her hand
and save her
life
 
Walk down the
moonlight path
forever
 
-Her Song-
      me

© 2008 Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"


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It's a very interesting idea, def intriguing.... Like the start, "scared to write"... As far as formatting and such, might be worth a bit of extra editing (the repetition of she for example), and just cleaning it up a little, cause it's good a really good vibe to it throughout and great potential... That soudns awful, doesn't it. Okay, so re-phrasing, it's a great piece, and with some sprucing it'll be quite impressive :)

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Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"

Bright souls have no certain destination and the moon got lost last night



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Do we really have to "tell all" for one to be a friend? I am not like most of the writers here at the cafe. I have not been writing for very long and actually started only a short time ago after my .. more..

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