Paint Me

Paint Me

A Poem by Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
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-A Brush....A Color.....-

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Start with my eyes
for they are my
soul’s window
 
Cover my Canvas 
With bright colors
To make me smile
 
Paint me a country
road with blue skies
above my head
 
Early spring with
Honey bees and
fields of daisies
 
An old tree swing
overlooking a
bubbling creek
 
Paint my heart
red covered by
a cotton dress
 
Completed only
when you see me
in your dreams
 
-Paint Me-
 
 

© 2008 Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"


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Very nice. Simple but effective imagery. Love the colors.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Just beautiful simple poem, I loved it, Yossi

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is a very creative piece. and i feel that adding color to certain words applied that little something extra to the piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love what you did here! Very creative! I love the colors you put into those words. I can picture clearly what you want thisperson to paint for you. I do believe that we are all looking for someone like this. Someone who will paint us.. not because of our beauty outside but what is inside us... the love we elude to everybody. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh I love this! :) Yay! I paint.. so this piece really appeals to me. I love how you incorporated the colors. Very creative! And the poem itself is wonderful. Great flow and imagery... awesome use of metaphor Amy :) I feel a hint of seduction as well ... sensual.

Beautifully done!



Posted 11 Years Ago


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Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"

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