Before

A time
before.
Before
instant
connections.
Instant access.
Instant entanglement.
Knowing others
thoughts
instantly.
Before.
Before,
silence
abounds.
Minds encircled
in silence.
Cocoon.
Unique thoughts,
personal thoughts,
slow thoughts,
quiet thoughts,
little interference.
Little interactions.
Like never
before,
new
interactions,
interconnections.
Like never
before.
Cocoons
obliterated.
Laid bare.
Connections,
light speed
connections.
Minds melding,
influencing,
formatting,
different.
Global,
new ways
of thinking
like never
before.
Shattering
reality,
the past,
like never
before

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

This one seems to be a comment on our internet world, along with a comparison of it with the pre-internet years. I'd say while the speed of communication is acknowledged, something has been lost with that speed. Instant isn't always good. Liked the spare delivery that causes the reader to make mental connections.

[John Prophet]

Hi JP,
“causes the reader to make mental connections.”
The skeletal structure of my work is designed to focus on individual words who’s meaning can be diluted within sentences and paragraphs I think. Also to allow the reader to flesh out meaning unique to them.
Thank you kindly for reading my work