Painter

Here comes the tiny painter

the buckets in her hand.

Her raven hair is flowing

as waves crash on the land.

her tiny toes are spreading

upon the beaches sand.

 

she reaches high into the sky

to paint the pale moonlight.

then over to the velvet blue

to paint the stars so bright.

 

her canvas is the sleeping world

her paint the universe

She the little painter girl who paints upon the earth

 

Reviews

[quinfinn]

an what an artiste is she! this is exquisitely playful and lovingly descriptive. very nice!

[Zahra]

This is a really cute poem, beautiful ending.

[CindyLu]

this is quite endearing and sweet. A beautifully gentle write :)

[Epipsychologist]

This is beautiful. I wish I had gentle thoughts sometimes.

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Very beautiful write, Riley

[Riley Mistwood]

Thanks :)

[John Fitzgerald]

So very charming and somewhat melodic yet melancholic or otherworldly :)

[Riley Mistwood]

thank you

[John Fitzgerald]

No problem poetess :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This world is what we make of it... some of it is chance but so much is what we put into it... I love the metaphoric references.

[Riley Mistwood]

thanks :)

[}Echo{]

I like this. Is paints a picture in the readers mind. Great write. :)

[Tina Kline]

An enchanting poem. It gives the reader a delightful image. Very enjoyable.

[Riley Mistwood]

Gracias

[Georgia Gypsy]

Lovely picture you have painted, very vivid images. I really like this!