if evil loved evil

if evil loved evil

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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i felt like rhyming a bit today.

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if evil loved evil


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if evil loved evil

what a world it would be

if the killers killed killers

and the good were set free

if the robbers robbed robbers

no one would steal from me

 and if evil loved evil

what a world it would be

if evil picked favourites

from the evil that it sees

 

and if all are created equal

why does heaven have a fee

if the world is a mystery

then who holds the key

if the truth of the answer

lies within you and me

then let evil be evil

and let the rest of us be free

 

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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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I reread this and thought of a great line from Finding Forrester when Jamal who lives in a dangerous part of the Bronx says to Claire..."what's hard is knowing that the ones you should be afraid of know you have nothing to give them"
a great read to revisit.

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Great line! Thanks for re-reading this one!


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Enjoyable and thought provoking read dear ma'am. I like how you have illustrated that evil has it's own version of love, which ironically is a love that is quite different from what we would expect. As though evil doesn't hate, just loves in its own way.. It sort of transcends the definition of love. With all of the world's anomalies, there are infinite things to learn as the key to the world's mystery remains to be found, let alone used.

Regards.

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thank you for reaching in to find this one and leaving this great comment.
Great read Ana. What a thought, if only eh? The bast... s of this world stabbing each other in the back and leaving the rest of us alone. Could ease the over population of prisons too. You know I had a rhyming day too yesterday. Once a rhymer.......

Chris

Posted 10 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Hey chris, thanks much. Ya, if only...
I reread this and thought of a great line from Finding Forrester when Jamal who lives in a dangerous part of the Bronx says to Claire..."what's hard is knowing that the ones you should be afraid of know you have nothing to give them"
a great read to revisit.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Great line! Thanks for re-reading this one!
Killers kill killers
all the time.
Thieves cant trust
themselves not
to steal from
themselves
so they steal
from you, me
their brother

anybody.
evil is a
narcissist.
it loves nothing
but
itself
in lieu
of not being
capable
of anything
good.
Being favoured
is for
Darwinian Law
of only
the strong
alive
to carry on.



Thank you for the literary and cerebral sustenance.



Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

It's a far from perfect world. That's for sure.
Thank Alan, I appreciate your thoughtful com.. read more
I love the subject that you decided to discern on in this poem. Really thought-provoking, and I love this kind of poetry that delves into such a topic. I enjoyed this one, excellent job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Thank you Chrys Marie. :)
& then we come to learn the price of freedom....
or perhaps the definition of it.

Love this piece. It diverges & converges. I do not know which it begins with or how it ends,
but it pulsates.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reading this (again). :)
If precious loved precious...

I imagine envy.

Should bring fire....

I imagine the sun.

But less standoffish.

It ends the same.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Insert "to" after "about"
Dennis The Tiger Cat (dave)

4 Years Ago

It sounds like I did. That was over a month ago. Hold on, let me read it again.... yeah, I liked .. read more
Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm happy you liked it.
We can wish for Utopia. I wonder if it is within enough of us to make the effort to achieve it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago


Well, we'd have to kill all the bad guys to make it happen but then we become them and so on.. read more
The first part brings a thought provoking concept Ana, as I read it I just imagined what this world would be like if the evil people or powers fight against themselves and let the normal human beings be free... It would definitely be a world to live freely...

The second part is pretty amazing the way you invoked some questions in our minds, and I think they are very logical... A very lovely write Ana...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Thanks for that kind review Dhiman.
A very poignant and insightful poem, I really loved this part

and if all are created equal
why does heaven have a fee



Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Thanks do much Cowboy!
Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Obviously I meant "so much". :)

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