Tumbleweed

Tumbleweed

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
"

Just a poem that was inspired by tumbleweed.

"

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Tumbling down
In tumbleweeds
Carried off
Upon a breeze


Lips on lips
Skin on skin
Tumbling down
Into sin


Little bumps
Prickle there
Fingers tangled
In tumbled hair


Kiss me love
If you dare
Upon this breast
Which I will bare


Tumbling into
Tumbleweeds
Secluded from
The prying trees


Stealing kisses
I give for free
Tumble, Tumble
Fall with me


~



© 2020 Ana Papaya


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I have a thing for the word 'tumbleweed'
Not sure I'd like to get too up close familiar with it, but you make it all sound very tempting

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

Didn't know that. I always picture it blowing down the empty streets of an abandoned frontier town w.. read more
Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

I think you can picture it in any scene you wish. :)
Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

.K man......
This poem has a lovely flow to it. I visualized a breezy garden and the lovers tumbling down a precipice in it. Took me away.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thank you again, P. For always finding a kind word for me :)
Frolicking outside in the open. Skin exposed to the elements and a touch of loving too Ana. Feeling envious :) Nicely composed work. Visual with it.

Chris

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thx again, chris. :)
so enticed to tumble with this tumbleweed.
allegorically sensual in so many ways...

and those prying trees--shame on them. the voyeurs...

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thanks a bunch, jacob. :)
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SKY
Kisses, tumbles, love, lips on lips....seems you're altogether in different world. Nice one!





Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Thank you, yes. In another world!
SKY

4 Years Ago

Welcome and good to see you smile :)
you know Ana, if it weren't for those darn "prying trees" I would say pucker those lips... er... what, wait ... its all that tumbling free it scattered my brain.. or was it the fingers tangled in tumbled hair??!! well one thing is true, your poem light, fun to read and romantic as hell, definitely had me tumbling with those tumbleweeds... I still think those prying trees should mind their own business though... it is also a really a breezy poem Ana Papaya...

redzone

Posted 4 Years Ago


redzone

4 Years Ago

no excuses huh... lol... watch out everyone Ana has her whips out tonight... so behave... er... ;0p .. read more
Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Lol. Please, I'm so opposite of tough.
redzone

4 Years Ago

whew, that's good... but I knew this already when you said once how in ice hockey after a hard check.. read more
Great imagery and vivid expression throughout. I could almost feel the dance of a tumbleweed within the rhythm of it. Your theme and message is clear, yet not told outright so it leaves room for the reader to interpret within themselves as well. Great job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Hello Gaia, thank you for the warm review. I appreciate it. :)
I like your playful thoughts so much. Gosh! So many amazing writers here. Keep writing. Blessings.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Also Selena, I wanted you to know that I tried to return nice gesture and read something of yours bu.. read more
Selena D. Harper

4 Years Ago

Hello Ana, wow! You are so sweet! I just rejoined this website after a long time so yet to post my w.. read more
Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Hi Selena, that's so odd because your user ID is David Waters.
Yet here you are as Selena and.. read more
Delicious, that's the only thing I can think of to say about this piece, but when has that ever shut me up, right? The softness of your words here, with the flow and rhythm of your words, gives the reader a sense of falling and tumbling right along with you. I think this might be my favourite of yours.

Okay, I'll shut up now. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lorry

4 Years Ago

Okay, have I told you about the difference between a14b and a 14c pipe cleaner? It really is quite f.. read more
Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

I politely smile and tune out now...
Lorry

4 Years Ago

Ah, she learns quickly, this one. :)
Fun and romantic... You pulled it off beautifully. I picture the writer lying on her back and grinning from ear-to-ear while writing this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

Yes, perhaps she was, she's a bit of a dreamer. :)
Thank you James!
James

4 Years Ago

Aren't we all

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