disgusting habits

disgusting habits

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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when he finished 
she rolled over and smoked a cigarette
     taking no pleasure in that either
it was a disgusting habit 
that left her mouth smelling foul
  with the ghost of a bad taste
that lingered 
long after it had been replaced

~


© 2020 Ana Papaya


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she needs to change brands in her men, and throw those cancer sticks in the garbage.

j.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Agree. Nothing sexy about kissing a smoker.
She should just quit.
That s**t will kill you from the inside, out.
The cigarettes are no damn good either.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Yeah. I agree!
wow Papaya, again, short sweet and I guess in this case "disgusting"... the ironic thing is that both "habits" are harmful to your health... and often both are difficult to quit, but very much needed...

redzone

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

yeah... that is so very true. :)
thank you.
For me the cigarette plays almost more like a mint in that this poem was that good and gritty. Nice!


Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

thanks. :)
smoking is gross.

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