oysters, wine and a helluva good time

oysters, wine and a helluva good time

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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it was an oysters and wine kind of thing
so, i knew i was screwed before i even got there
and I don't even like guys with long hair
but i got lost in eyes that were much deep
it was all i could see, 
and everything else
was just felt

~


© 2020 Ana Papaya


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What a beautiful write Ana, with such a beautiful end line and the audience sighs.... Despite the fact I wouldn't eat an oyster even if it cured covid.
Well, maybe, but I wouldn't like it. Some things are just not meant to be swallowed 😀

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Thanks much! :)
Not being a fan of oysters, I might've missed this hidden delight! Good thing your narrator pushed thru her initial dislike. Love your wispy treatment of this encounter, especially the last two lines (so perfect) Fondly Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Margie. :)
I appreciate it
Its those damn oysters! Or maybe the bottle of wine, both of them. A couple of glasses of vino always helps elongate a strut.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

3 Years Ago

: ) maybe a little of both. gosh, i forgot i even wrote this. :) thank you for taking me back to it.. read more
A amazing poem and memory. Good to lose control. Thank you Ana for sharing the outstanding poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

3 Years Ago

thank you :)
yes, it is good to lose control sometimes. :)
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

We need to and you are welcome Ana.
Never trust a dude with long hair or a pony tail! :P

I like this. It paints a very intimate and even romantic scene succinctly.

But wine with oysters? Hmmm.

I prefer a good beer with smoked oysters :P

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

3 Years Ago

thanks. and yeah, usually i go for red but a nice white works in this case. beer is a good choice .. read more
but at least you could feel something, even if it was fleeting...on succulent dinner and goodbye.
and i guess you wouldn't like me...the long hair...oh well.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

3 Years Ago

Lol. :)
Certain exceptions apply. Thx Jacob.

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