chocolate

chocolate

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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you know i'm no good for you

          break me apart

devour me in pieces

      or hold me on your tongue

let me melt in your mouth

dissolving slow

     but you know

           however you have me

i'm no good for you

~


© 2020 Ana Papaya


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Sweet, bitter, and dark. Emotions and mood make us different flavors. It would get boring if we were the same all the time.

The best things in life are never good for us. That's why it's forbidden. As a fellow chocoholic, I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Joe. :) :)
I like what you said about emotions and moods.



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Wait, what?!
Lololol
So so so cool.
I'm sure I don't need to explain why I support this.
Though, truly, the reasons are numerous.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

So glad you like it. :)
This was one of Ned's very favorite poems
AP

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

I know that's not what you meant though. :)
Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

are U suggesting I am musically unedjumakeated??
Cuz you're right
A:
Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

: )
LOL, love this Ana, exactly. Chocolate always wins.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Dawn

2 Years Ago

Ana, your very talented sweetheart.
Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

thank you dawn, I appreciate that very much
Dawn

2 Years Ago

my pleasure as its true.
No worries....I'll keep my bonding strong with chocolate even if it causes harmful effects on me....
Love's also not always good to health but still people do, right? ;)

Oh no! I'm feeling a carve for chocolate right now....who'll get me a bar?😟


Posted 2 Years Ago


Tahsin (Taah-scene)

2 Years Ago

😄😄😄thank you...I wanted a real one though... :D
Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

well i'd need to know where you live and all that so I could really mail you one but I would do that.. read more
Tahsin (Taah-scene)

2 Years Ago

That'd be too troublesome for you😯...it's ok! Am glad you hear you sweet words😌
Almight.. read more
Nicely done Ana. Are you a chocoholic? Chocolate always lifts my mood and puts a smile on my face. Not many men can do that, I tell ya.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

Lol! I'm with you for sure. Chocolate ranks higher than men .
Chris

2 Years Ago

Absolutely :))
Yeah, yeah, yeah...chocolate is bad for you, we've heard it all our lives, and you've done your job, warning us.
Now, let's talk about the flip side of chocolate, shall we, hmmm?

CHOCOLATE!
Powerful Source of Antioxidants. ...
May Improve Blood Flow and Lower Blood Pressure. ...
Raises HDL and Protects LDL From Oxidation. ...
May Reduce Heart Disease Risk. ...
May Protect Your Skin From the Sun. ...
Could Improve Brain Function.

I know, I know-- a lot of 'may's and 'could's...we'll just accept it all as gospel, shall we?
A very nice write, Ana, even if we all know that the health benefits of chocolate really are legion.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

yeah but i'm diabetic so it's extra bad and tempting.
does have a lot of positive benefits t.. read more
angel

2 Years Ago

I am also diabetic; a can of Hershey's cocoa and a bag of Splenda still transport me, though! Store .. read more
Chocolate is a way to dream ... of faraway places where ships sail and return with delicious stowaways. truly, Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

delicious stowaways, I like that. :)
thanks!
Chocolate and Lay's chips. Bad for us and so good. I loved the poem. Most of us want things that will make us pay one day. Thank you Ana for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote


Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

So good to see you Coyote. Thank you for the comment!
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Ana.
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Gee
Just gonna grab some now. Pretty much comes up some of the women from my distant past, especially a married one that was my tenant and ended up telling her hubby I was gonna set up shop with her as she was leaving him for me. Result was no tenants and 2 months lost rent :((

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

oh wow, that sucks!
i'm thinking it wasn't a chocolate shop she wanted to set up :)
But how can something so sweet be no good? Love the imagery of melting and dissolving. The metaphor is stunning. Nice to read you again, Ana. Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

hi Lydi! Thank you so much. :)
So good to see you.

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