Fear is the mightiest weapon

Fear is the mightiest weapon

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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i lost you in the wastelands
there was a war going on
  and i was never meant to fight it
skirts don't carry guns, that's what i thought
until i picked up a gun
and i became both good and evil
a killer and saviour
a f*****g survivor


© 2020 Ana Papaya


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A f*****g survivor, probably the best end-line ever. It could be copied and pasted into most of what I write.
If you push someone long and hard enough, some of their traits will be smeared onto us through contact. It is a b***h to get out, but is never as permanent as it looks or feels.
Grateful its fictional, would hate to see your mugshot in the papers. But if im on the jury, you'll walk :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

hi, glad you liked it!



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precisely why I would never mess with the Ana of Papayas
Very scary stuff

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

Glad to have you on my side. :)
The thought of killing horrifies me, I have a fear of it but faced with do it or die I would become that f*****g survivor. Great read. Makes you think.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

I have no doubt you would kick a*s if you absolutely had to. :)
Fear & pain and particularly the fear of pain is a great motivator... this is a great little poem which carries a lot of truth in both the bow wave and the wake of it.... nice one Ana :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville

1 Year Ago

you know its a pleasure & its mine :)
Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

mine also to see you here :)
Neville

1 Year Ago

now that is very kind of you, thank you ever so... :)
Life make us learn we must play many parts.
"and i became both good and evil
a killer and saviour
a f*****g survivor"
I love the above lines dear Ana. Powerful and worthwhile.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

thanks for that Coyote!
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Ana. A powerful and worthwhile poem.
A f*****g survivor, probably the best end-line ever. It could be copied and pasted into most of what I write.
If you push someone long and hard enough, some of their traits will be smeared onto us through contact. It is a b***h to get out, but is never as permanent as it looks or feels.
Grateful its fictional, would hate to see your mugshot in the papers. But if im on the jury, you'll walk :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

hi, glad you liked it!
a very powerful write...either sex and be killer, survivor or saviour...
skirts or not does signify strength...we all have it when we need it.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

thank you so much Jacob!

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