frost

frost

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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frost
every word
is frost
and your heart no longer breathes
only solid ice
where once was me

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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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How archaic notions of sexuality and virginity are foisted primarily on girls.
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When the coldness of disappointment. Frozen heart leave us alone. Powerful use of words dear Ana.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

So sorry I missed your comment here, Coyote.
Thank you kindly for always finding a nice word .. read more
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

Hello dear Ana. I hope you are doing well and enjoying the days of Summer. You are welcome.
and as the mist leaves no scar upon the dark green hill.. so his body leaves no scar, on you nor ever will.. courtesy of Mr. L. N. Cohen

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago

He very rarely signed anything in later years, or so am told.. his note and signed photo are much t.. read more
Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

you will have to tell me the story of how this came about some time, and I will share my own story
Neville

2 Years Ago

okay... :)
Trapped and frozen, who will free us from lost loves spell? The cold and lonely claustrophobia of discarded love both freezes and burns, but never anaeths... Aneayhsat...numbs the pain.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

lol! I can't spell it either. I tried and got the squiggly red line. :)
Lorry

2 Years Ago

The microsoft scowl :)
Black holes are my favorite math problems.



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

that stuff is way beyond my comprehension :)
what a tortured exchange for the speaker to accept...
love this....
again, the brevity...what's between the lines.


Posted 2 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much Jacob! :)
Left out in the cold Ana, and it felt bitterly cold as well. You convey the pain well here.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

I appreciate this comment Chris, thank you!
The repetition of the names of frozen water serves to emphasize the speaker's feeling of having been frozen out. A very good image for pain.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

John, thank you so much for the visit and comment. :)

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