The bad guy

The bad guy

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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he moved in the shadows
and lived in the dark
but shone the brightest light
upon her tender heart

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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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like The Leader of the Pack...misunderstood maybe because of his look or aura..but really a gentle soul in disguise...
oh, i like this so much..compact and sweet...says more in between the lines than in the lines themselves...and that is such a good thing in poetry...drawing attention to what's not there.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

yes, exactly :)
thanks so much Jacob!



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Wonderful words shared dear Ana. I agree. Sometime in darkness. Great kindness is hidden. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

thank you!
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Ana.
Because you were worth leaving the darkside for :)
This would be a longer review if I knew more star wars puns, but shh! I have only seen the first one the whole way through, and thats only because I couldnt think up a good enough excuse not to be dragged to the cinema as a nine year old. These days of course, I just say "yeuck, there's too many people in there that I wouldnt trust in daylight, never mind a darkened room" :)
Just goes to show us Ana, something about a book and its cover. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

Yes. A book and it's cover. Same goes for wine. :)
Thanks Lorry!
like The Leader of the Pack...misunderstood maybe because of his look or aura..but really a gentle soul in disguise...
oh, i like this so much..compact and sweet...says more in between the lines than in the lines themselves...and that is such a good thing in poetry...drawing attention to what's not there.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

yes, exactly :)
thanks so much Jacob!
Sounds a shady character Ana, but he certainly illuminated her :) I like this, it made me smile.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

Thanks Chris. :)
Glad it made you smile!

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