Girl walks in

Girl walks in

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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I've seen this movie before 
girl walks in bumps her head on the door 
boy runs to the rescue 
trips to the floor
girl turns around 
sees the boy on the ground 
looks down at him  
with a sideways frown 
she offers a hand pokes the boy in the eye  
he takes it in stride 
he's a pretty patient guy 
he laughs out loud and greets her with a "hi"  
she bends down for a hug 
but he gets up instead 
and now the girl's suffered  
another bump on the head 
I've seen this movie before 
they're a clumsy pair 
he's working up the courage 
she's wondering should she dare 
in the end it doesn't matter 
they're not a good match 
she's a problem to an answer  
he's an itch she can't scratch 
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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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and here as i was reading i was thinking "what a great way to come together, something they will laugh about years from now"
but alas...one too many bumps on the head and pokes in the eye.
sometimes the physical upsets the emotional, and then the mental says no.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Yes, I think that's exactly right. :)
Thanks again, Jacob. Hope you're doing ok out there.



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The world is chaos. An ocean of chaos. We come together when we define that chaos in a similar way. Through circumstance, geography, temper, similar things to lose... etc.. It's more vicious than we know in the wild when we don't have things in common. Have you ever seen a movie called "30 Days of Night"?

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Dennis The Tiger Cat (dave)

11 Months Ago

("i can smell your blood")
Ana Papaya

11 Months Ago

I can't remember all the vampire movies of the past 25 years but I would put the Blade trilogy up th.. read more
Dennis The Tiger Cat (dave)

11 Months Ago

The old Hellboy movies directed by Guillermo del Toro are amazing. Actually, anything directed or .. read more

the secret is in the 'head hitting' which can turn a casual encounter into a block buster.. nice one..

Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Ha. Yes! A block buster indeed. :)
Thanks Neville!
Neville

1 Year Ago


my pleasure :)
unrequited love & shy emotions on both sides, first timers no doubt. kind of reminds me of youthful times & crushes on boys
cheerio carola

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thanks Carola, yes I kind of had that clumsy unsure youthfulness in mind. :)
I recall many a starring role in such movies. :)) There is no script, and even is there was, the first rapid pounding of a heart, would banish it forever.

Love the interaction portrayed; so true to life.

Beccy.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Hi Beccy. :)
Thanks for checking this one out. I've definitely started in my share of clumsy.. read more
Beccy

1 Year Ago

Safe and well so far, but like everyone else, missing friends and family, and especially hugs. X
Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Yes. Same over here.
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Sums up many a relationship. It's a shame there has been no " test" developed that would show comparability from the get go, would save a lot of heartache but would do away with much fun I guess :))



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Well, those dating sites do have some algorithms meant to match against compatibility but science an.. read more
I was happily reading along just loving their encounter and I come to the end only to find out it wasn't meant to be. Your writing is really good. I like this a lot.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Hi Peacegal, thanks so much.
and here as i was reading i was thinking "what a great way to come together, something they will laugh about years from now"
but alas...one too many bumps on the head and pokes in the eye.
sometimes the physical upsets the emotional, and then the mental says no.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Yes, I think that's exactly right. :)
Thanks again, Jacob. Hope you're doing ok out there.
An amusing visual write Ana with a great ending. Strong finish. Good to read you again. Hope all is good with you.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Hi Chris, thank you. All is good. More or less.
:) I hope everything is good out there with .. read more
Chris

1 Year Ago

Yes my friend. Plodding along and trying to keep virus free :)
Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Same. :) So far so good.

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