Get it while it's hot

Get it while it's hot

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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I'm killing myself with pride
when I should be begging to feel your hands
          tangled up in my hair
and your mouth crushing my rage

I want to f**k you
with utter disregard
for what it means to your heart
I can't play at love
promising sun, moon and stars

I am a trembling mess of need
greedy for your heat, in this moment

in this moment
I am cooling
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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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This is not only great poetry.. this is something else entirely.. if it aint already, I imagine your friend request box is gonna be overflowing before too long.. A super little bit o fine but not so subtle erotica Ana.. 100/100
……… Neville :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


I think erotica, like poetry and beauty and just about everything else, is in the eye of the.. read more
Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

Ha! Thanks Neville. I'd be happy to have you double friend me but honestly, one of you is enough! :.. read more
Neville

2 Months Ago


I know where I am coming from but have no idea where I'm headed :)



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Mmmmmmm
Disappointment is still delicious, when you put it this nicely.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

6 Days Ago

Thanks. :)
There’s a lot of vulnerability and want in these words. Emotions that we don’t always reveal unless the feelings just can’t be helped. A powerful, intense expression of passion, Ms. Ana.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comment. :)
Pestonjee

2 Months Ago

It was my great pleasure :)
"I can't play at love promising sun, moon and stars" At least this seems like an honest confession of the self. A funny side note: I have refrigerator magnets designed of the moon and sun. My baby girl was in the kitchen playing and asked, "Daddy, can I have the sun and the moon?" I looked at her and then at her mommy and said, yup, she's are definitely a female. Mommy didn't think it was funny. :) But I let her have the magnets.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

Lol! That is incredibly cute. :)
Holy smokes! Careful them flames might spread.I really dug this. You are the best at getting a feeling across.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

Hey James, thanks a bunch!
Forget your pride
go for it girl..i
know that feeling
ahem....
without utter disregard
seek the heat..

A passionate piece
of erotica
Always great
to read your words...

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

hi Fran Marie,
thanks for the great comment!!
Wow, the raw desire in this one is strong. "A trembling mess of need".....so erotic....so passionate. Ana, you rock! Lydi**

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

Thanks so much Lydi!
dear Ana... your words remind me of the Movie
“Frenchman’s Creek”. An old Movie, but very realistic and a “page turner” Novel about the time I was born. A version in the 80’s is my favorite and available on U-Tube. The ending is amazing... and so is your Poem above. gently, Pat

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

Hi Pat, thanks for that. Will.have to check that one out.
Really appreciate the comment!
Caustic beauty. Well played. I will read more now methinks...

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

Hi Brian, thanks! Read as you like. Just random stuff, mixed themes. My poems change with my mood.. read more
The best thing about this one is the title. "Get it while it's hot" haha, marvelous.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much. Glad you like it!
I had to reaad this a few times because the first line rang a klaxon in my head and I could bore anyone to death on that particular topic. Suffice it to say my new years resolution is always to be less stubborn. The phrase "You are cutting off your nose to spite your face" has been said to me more than once, but I am way too stubborn to google what it means.
As for the rest of this, I feel a little (or alot) of complete honesty goes along, long way. It's only that silly pride part stopping us from trying it more.
Who knows, maybe if they tried it (honesty) it would catch on.
I see this with #beingreal trending soon.
I like it. There is nothing wrong with words that can shout without the need for CAPSLOCK 😀
Ps... You almost got another Plath like mention there. Oh, you did.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

Good morning Lorry and thank you again for a great comment. #beingreal - love it.
Lorry

2 Months Ago

And good morning to you too, I think. Yes, maybe, is it? Yes, i think.
It's now afternoon her.. read more

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