Music

Music

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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There came a lullaby
   a hushed voice
serenading my sighs

it's a wonderful way to die
locked in a dream 
    of you and I

I can see the stars when I close my eyes
  they write their own poetry
and I imagine it's for me

losing myself
    in everything it doesn't mean
but it means so much to me
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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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Simply blissful. Kind of moment and feeling we never want to end. Perfect ending, too.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Thanks a bunch James! :)
I think you summed up more in yourlast line here Ana than all the self help ologists could ever hope to achieve.
They do have a tendency to mean more to some than others, especially after realising it wasn't as all encompassing as we thought, to some.
But still, it always has that feel of meaning more when it slips from our grasp.
I still can't figure out how all this love stuff caught on, I really can't.
Why do I now feel the urge to sigh though, whilst nodding in agreement.
(Sigh)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Thank you kindly, Lorry. :)
I never trust those self help ologists.
Lorry

3 Months Ago

They try to look so trusting 😀
Gorgeous..... really well done..a masterpiece. It was a pleasure to read.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Hi Allie, thanks very much :)
Light and Ashes

3 Months Ago

You're very welcome!
Dying is a poor option, but the right dream can make anything feel right.
The poem all works very nicely
But
Dying could be a bit extreme
Just saying

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Yes. Totally agree! I am not planning on dying anytime soon. :) Was thinking on a little deat.. read more
Great poem! I really appreciate your lyricism.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Hi Kevin, thanks for liking it. :)
Such a lovey versed
poem here..with dreamy
tones of sweet love
an amazing piece of
poetry so well expressed

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

thanks for this Fran Marie, so appreciated
music makes me dream, the stars are witness, i dream of love and it moves my pen---
maybe it is "everything it doesn't mean" that actually is the impetus.
mmmm, such a thought provoking write.
Much more to this than seems.
j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Thanks much Jacob. :)
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Rye
This is such a wonderful write

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Thanks Rye!
Rye

3 Months Ago

not a problem

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