Wind

Wind

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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So timid today

trying on a gentle breeze

weaving your way between the trees
chained to nothing and no one

I want to chase you

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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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:) .............................. wonderful! so few words ... i love the wind .. watching it play through tall pines and oaks ... its like a hush from God .. so blessed by your poem this morning Ana ... let our spirits ride the wind ... chase away ... we can all use a break me thinks ..
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Yes! I think we can all use a break for sure!! Thx Mr. E!
Good morning. :)



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And who could blame you.
When we notice the first listless breaths picking up, inner child and grown-up battle it out to see if we can catch that breeze, maybe get ahead of it and be scooped up by it, free at last, until thoughts of landing show up. But at least the beginning would be exciting, before the bump to earth.
I picture you floating free, squealing "wheee" all the way 😀

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

ha! so true. the leap is easy. the landing not so much! :) thanks lorry!
Do you not usually "try on" a gentle breeze? I wonder what it would look like from you, some kind of "powerful" wind.

Do you even have it in you? a very strong gust

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TK Little

2 Months Ago

Big willy style?
TK Little

2 Months Ago

(it's a will smith joke, not a dick joke; just in case you were wondering)
Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

:) I would have wondered so thank you for clarifying.
:) .............................. wonderful! so few words ... i love the wind .. watching it play through tall pines and oaks ... its like a hush from God .. so blessed by your poem this morning Ana ... let our spirits ride the wind ... chase away ... we can all use a break me thinks ..
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Yes! I think we can all use a break for sure!! Thx Mr. E!
Good morning. :)
I love this, Ana.
We tend to chase what and who shy away from us...when they are gusts in our face, we back away...
but a hint of interest, and we are traveling on our own waft of a heart's air.

j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Yrs, it's rather like that ain't it? :)
Thanks Jacob. Happy Saturday!
Ana dear... we are having restless winds...
that sigh like lovers looking for a whirlwind
romance. You have penned the perfect poem
that has the energy needed for a good old
fashioned Chase across the meadows and beyond.
truly, Pat

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Pay, you are beautiful and always bring me a smile.
Thank you!! :)

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