topia

topia

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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you crave 
 a confession 
     you will never 
receive
   i'll never 
let you believe
 i love you

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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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Ah, but never letting them believe it doesn't mean it isn't true... Although cynical me agrees and concurs that 38th time bitten, 39th time shy 😀
It makes sense not to tell them though, as theyou mentioned would make the title You-topia and I think it may be madey-uppy.
Ps... Sorry, my optimism classes were cancelled during lockdown 😀

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry

11 Months Ago

No, I was just wuoting my top forty,, with one page left blank for any future surprises 😀
Ana Papaya

11 Months Ago

Always good to save some for later. :)
Lorry

11 Months Ago

There's always the possibility of another.... Or one that slipped the mind in the jumble of bite mar.. read more



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I know this exact feeling, except not so much with regard to "I love you" . . . for me, it's just NOT explaining myself to people who are blatantly offensive. I just walk away & they can figure it out in whatever weird interpretation they'll come up with anyway. Some people just can't be armed with the idea that they've got your mind captive (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Months Ago


Words never said. I believe haunt us more then the people who deserved them. Amazing use of words. You said everything needed in so few words. Thank you dear Ana for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


Keep him guessing till the all the money is transferred into your account, after that and depending on how much it is, love is in the air. Well, actually, you're in the air heading to a different country.

Posted 4 Months Ago


A kiss and a follow-up slap.
The ultimate sign of affection.
(I think he knows)
I like that the poem itself is hourglass shaped, too. It really adds to it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thanks VM, the shape is a fluke but I'm glad it works. :)
Thats the best way to keep him or her.
I've seen the pitfalls of being too yielding.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

I guess there's truth to that. Keep them wondering. :)
AJNJ

10 Months Ago

Indeed....... :)


................ brava brevitas superias .. and then some :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

11 Months Ago

Sometimes there isn't much more to say. :)
Thanks much, Neville!
Neville

11 Months Ago


less is so often more than.......... and truly :)
Ah, the female mystique!
It's how you purposely befuddle men; I do not believe we'll ever really discover why.
Powerful piece.



Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

11 Months Ago

Thanks Jimmy.
love becomes rather
complicated to say
the least..sometimes
it s better not
to reveal those
three little words

a brief yet very well
penned piece that
speaks volumes

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Fran Mari!
Woah sensational and noddingly relatable to my love life as well. Kudos for a fab poem in brevity that says a lot.


Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

11 Months Ago

Thank you much!
I'm a big fan of William Butler Yeats, but I've never read anything out loud. I think you would like him. A lot.

"he wishes for clothes for heaven".... (usually they substitute "aedh" for "he" though because... I'm a stupid american, most of the time)... but everything he did was good. Everything. (this piece reminds me of him)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dennis The Tiger Cat (dave)

11 Months Ago

Normally I'd say... "teleprompter". But, Liam Neeson is a certain kind of actor. You should see w.. read more
Ana Papaya

11 Months Ago

Is he really? I had no idea. I'm impressed.
Dennis The Tiger Cat (dave)

11 Months Ago

Would be even more impressed to know that Sir Tony is distantly related to William Butler Yeats? Li.. read more

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