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A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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unwhole
    crawling through time
assembling a mosaic
  of lost pieces

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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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Love this! Reminds me of some wisdom I picked up healing from childhood abuse . . . I may have become broken & lost a few of my pieces, but life is a journey to find those pieces & put myself back together again (which happily, I have!) *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago




whichever way I look at these words .. they read beautiful . so why do I sense there might be something a tad dark that I am yet missing ...

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

From darkness comes beauty I think.
Or at least the appreciation of it. :)

Th.. read more
I think many can relate
to this poem..find
themselves broken
scraping the bottom
but persistence can
prevail to mend those
lost pieces and make
whole again..
so well penned
and expressed;

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the kind comment Fran Marie!
I see myself in this mosaic of words. I'm a worm hence I crawl. A loser so I gather lost, broken pieces of myself. I don't know why but I really relate to this.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Hi Mr. P, thank you kindly for the nice comment. :)
While initially maybe a little dark, and on the surface depressing...
I see a hero here. One of self sacrifice and foresight and incredible force of will.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thanks for seeing that. Always the hero of my own story. :)

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