Penetrated

Penetrated

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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Your tower 
rips through my sky

and the only thing that shatters
is my heart

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Firstly I would like to thank you for helping me avoid having to make a choice
Much too early in the morning for all that choosing type stuff
And the read itself, short and sweet, nicely composed (is there a metaphorical something going on here) although I am concerned about the effect on your heart and hope that things eventually worked out

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Glad I could make it easy on you. Metaphorical? Probably... my heart? that thing has a way of .. read more
Dave Brown

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At my mind this is very urban and very sexual. Penetration of human sexual organs or penetration of virgin skies. Both of them make at my mind strong eruption of my imagination. Shattered heart or Earth core . Both of them make me think about our own mortality.

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Mortality it's actually on mind since I was born. I am scare to death to die.
Ana Papaya

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It's a common fear, death
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2 Weeks Ago

Yes sometimes it's can give me lot of anxiety when I imagine I will never again see this world and a.. read more
So much said in this emotion packed short one, Ana. When the heart is shattered, it is difficult to put it back together again. Lydi**

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Hi Lydi, thank you for popping over to read this one. :)
Your brevity captures a moment. If love doesn't shatter your heart then you're not doing it right. Beautiful poem.

As an odd aside, I was scrolling through your poems when you reviewed mine.

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Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

True statement. And yes, odd but in a nice way.


I immediately thought of Cohen's ' There is a crack in every thing, that's how the light gets in' ... your words here, tho few, are really quite beautiful too :)

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Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Thank you much, Neville :)
This is really good. Anytime I can read something this brief, and it keep me pondering... I'm thankful to the author.

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Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Thanks Cory, very much appreciate the kind comment!
Fantastic Ms. Ana. A great impact made!

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Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much :)
wow....this has such double meaning.

the heart will mend and the sky will turn blue again...a beautiful, calming blue.

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Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Thanks very much for this comment, Jacob. :)
Defiant self sacrifice...
With a dash of beautiful obscenity.

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Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Thank you. I like that.
Firstly I would like to thank you for helping me avoid having to make a choice
Much too early in the morning for all that choosing type stuff
And the read itself, short and sweet, nicely composed (is there a metaphorical something going on here) although I am concerned about the effect on your heart and hope that things eventually worked out

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Glad I could make it easy on you. Metaphorical? Probably... my heart? that thing has a way of .. read more
Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

...................cool....................

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