Velvet

Velvet

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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pressed beneath your pressure
I am your pleasure

something delicate
crushed
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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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Gee
Slept with a single mother of 4 once, I'm sure if I'd have had a good look I'd have found rusty bikes, shopping trolleys, perhaps an old car. I'd finished, she didn't even know I'd started. Nowt delicate there :))
So many images conjured by so few words...hot !!
Good morning Ana P


Posted 10 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

This was during your womanizing years before you were married obviously. :)
Good morning, G.. read more
Gee

10 Months Ago

Aye, any port in a storm :)
Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Lol!! :)



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I love the subtle unspoken parallel you draw between making-love-as-being-pressed and pressing-flowers-to-preserve . . . off-the-charts clever ways you combine ideas, all the time! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sensitive, real and wonderful words shared dear Ana. A wonderful poem shared dear friend.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Good morning Coyote, thank you very much!
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

Good morning dear Ana and you are welcome.
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Gee
Slept with a single mother of 4 once, I'm sure if I'd have had a good look I'd have found rusty bikes, shopping trolleys, perhaps an old car. I'd finished, she didn't even know I'd started. Nowt delicate there :))
So many images conjured by so few words...hot !!
Good morning Ana P


Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

This was during your womanizing years before you were married obviously. :)
Good morning, G.. read more
Gee

10 Months Ago

Aye, any port in a storm :)
Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Lol!! :)
............................................yep

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

: )


............................ Tis rather too lovely just for words, you just gotta feel it too..
exquisitely enjoyed and then some ........................... Neville :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thank you for your appreciation of my words. :)
Neville

10 Months Ago


surreal pleasure.......................... :)
and it could be a really pleasant crush for sure.
a wonderfully presented paradox.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thank you much, Jacob :)
Damn...
NAILING it lately, kid.
Pun mostly intended.

This is gorgeous beyond words I'm capable of delivering.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thanks VM. :)
I appreciate that.

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