Wasting away

Wasting away

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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I held time
scooped in my hand
and watched as I lost it
with each grain of sand

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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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I know the feeling.
The kids do it to me mostly.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Yup. They're good for that. :)
Your brief breath of imagery reminds me of how perplexing time can be, at once seeming like it's passing by too quickly & also not fast enuf (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Thanks for appreciating this little bit of brevity, Margie!
A lovely piece of brevity Ana. So visual. Makes you want to appreciate each living moment. Time certainly doesn't hang about.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Hi Chris, thank you. Yes, every living moment... :)


On reading this little gem and without any conscious effort whatsoever, each corner of this old fella's mouth curled upwards to the sky............. most deserving of the full marks awarded :)
.............. Neville



Posted 1 Month Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Awfully kind of you, sir. Thank you.
sand is hard to hold...time is hard to hold, love is even harder to hold.

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Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Yes. Exactly. :)

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