Passing

Passing

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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How the wind carries your name
whilst my ears tingle
    and my heart feels pain

         sweetly comes the breeze 
   soothing comes the rain

remembering 
the falling of leaves
     ever so gentle upon your grave


a covering of warmth 
  over cold earth

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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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This is a graceful little snapshot, full of sparkling imagery . . . painting those plentiful moments when someone beloved crosses our minds, even years after their demise, it's still this palpable breeze that stirs every now & then (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the beautiful comment.



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Pulls on my heartstrings this piece Ana. Reminds me of Edna St. Vincent Millay and I have always been a huge fan of hers and her sonnets.

Chris

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thanks for the very kind comment, Chris.

................... these words comprise of a mourning song, they are felt as much as they are seen...

......... Neville

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the thoughtful comment, Neville.
Neville

10 Months Ago


you are of course, more than welcome :)
This is a graceful little snapshot, full of sparkling imagery . . . painting those plentiful moments when someone beloved crosses our minds, even years after their demise, it's still this palpable breeze that stirs every now & then (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the beautiful comment.
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This brings so much warmth and peace to something so tragic and terrible. Somebody I knew recently passed away and this made me smile!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Hi bee, thanks much for reading and commenting on this one. I'm glad it made you smile. :)
The worst is the thought of the cold earth covering a heart that once throbbed with warmth for us...I feel this poem...It touches me...

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thank you for feeling it. :)
AJNJ

10 Months Ago

You're most welcome :)

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