spun

spun

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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your faces
i recognize them all
like different weather patterns 
within the same season
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lovely use of metaphor; people are similar because of their sex, or hair color or even skin color, but they don't all look exactly alike or act alike; the same with weather patterns in a season like winter; not all winters are the same, some have ice storms, some have deep powder snow, etc, but not completely the same. I like this brevity poem very much Ana. Fondly, Betty

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much Betty :)
Betty Hermelee

9 Months Ago

You're very welcome!



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Your poem expresses how it can be for a forgetful old person like me, when so many writers disappear for a year or two or three. Then writers reappear at the cafe & I can't remember anything except whatever lingering emotion this person gives off for me. I can always feel if knowing this person was a good experience or not-so-good, even if I can't remember anything else! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Months Ago


Love this write. Like the metaphor.

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

Hi Kym, thank you again! :)
lovely use of metaphor; people are similar because of their sex, or hair color or even skin color, but they don't all look exactly alike or act alike; the same with weather patterns in a season like winter; not all winters are the same, some have ice storms, some have deep powder snow, etc, but not completely the same. I like this brevity poem very much Ana. Fondly, Betty

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much Betty :)
Betty Hermelee

9 Months Ago

You're very welcome!
oh you have said a whole lot in this little gem. Cleverly done.

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Thank you :)
Haven't been able write much now that summer is over and I'm back to work and m.. read more
Ladysue

9 Months Ago

You do short well Ana, it’s not easy to do short and have it have profound meaning. :))
Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Thank you :)
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Short, punchy and cleverly phrased!

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Thanks Kira :)
you've been peeking .

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

I would never. :)
Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

( tsk )
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At morning I am blooming spring
At afternoon I am heating summer
At evening I am Autumn of my mood
At night I am sleeping winter .

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

: ) I like that very much. That in itself is a poem.
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9 Months Ago

It's just came to my mind when I finished read your poem. Sometimes poem can be best review.
Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Yes, that is very true!
Short but yet so intense.
Noticing similarities.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Hi Christa, thank you for popping in on this one.
Nice to meet you. :)
Laconic Meraki

9 Months Ago

"A tie that binds "
So to speak.
And ditto love. ☺
This sounds in a brief four lines of free verse metaphor like someone the protagonist knows who has many mood changes which makes them difficult to understand?

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Hi John, yes. It's very much like that. Not necessarily difficult to understand but knowing them w.. read more
Yes, comparing moods to weather patterns is clever. This says a lot in few words. Nice!

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Thank you Relic, I hope your face is sunny today.
 Relic

9 Months Ago

Haha, I'm trying my best. :-)
Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Sometimes a little bit of effort pays off. :)

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