something brief

something brief

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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i left a tear 
     upon your pillow
it was all i needed to say

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This is simply divine ... simple but oh' so bloomin good ..

I once spilt a small amount of tonic water .. okay and maybe just a little bit of gin too on a girls pillow .. never realised until 12 hours later when I woke up in hospital .. her husband apparently hit me with the empty bottle ..

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

I appreciate the kind comment here Neville :)



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One of the best short-short-short statements ever written, as far as conjuring up a ton of other ideas in so few words (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

6 Months Ago

Thank you!! :))
Greatness need not be vast.

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

Thank you Delmar. :)
sweet brevity and short words... expressing a universal experience...evoking my memories of love's tears

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

Thank you for the nice comment, albee.
albee

8 Months Ago

“love is short...forgetting long”
Pablo Neruda
Wow Ana! This short gem leaves a mark. Powerful, full of meaning and with great emotion all wrapped in brief lines. Impressive!

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

Thank you Ladysue, your kind comment is so appreciated. :)
sometimes that's all that needs to be said.... they say a picture is worth a thousand words, well a tear speaks volumes.... Ana, you write with such emotion...

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

Thank you so very much, Curt
a very emotional use of fourteen words

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

Thanks a whole bunch Dave :)
kind of blurs the writing, but the point gets made...
beautiful three lines..
j.

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

Thanks so much Jacob. A beautiful profile pic. :)
A tear. Hold great meaning. Mean loss or great sadness. Powerful use of words and thoughts dear Ana.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

Thank you kindly, Coyote
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Ana.

This is simply divine ... simple but oh' so bloomin good ..

I once spilt a small amount of tonic water .. okay and maybe just a little bit of gin too on a girls pillow .. never realised until 12 hours later when I woke up in hospital .. her husband apparently hit me with the empty bottle ..

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

I appreciate the kind comment here Neville :)
Brief, but perfectly formed and says way more than the sum of its parts. Even a flyweight can land a knockout punch and this certainly hit the sweet spot. Can't see them getting back on their feet after that.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

Thanks Lorry. Very appreciated. :)

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