The Girl In My Dreams

There's a little twist depending on how you think this poem will go

I'm really happy,
For the girl in my dreams.
She's in a world that's,
So poise and so clean.
All my remaining happiness,
Resides in those beautiful dreams.
Giving her whatever reality,
In which she deems.
Her joy is my light,
She faithfully gleams.
She makes scenarios for me to watch,
I sure wish reality could change into what I have seen.
Oh how I so envy,
The girl in my dreams.
The worse part is,
She's the better version,
Of me.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Unforgiven II]

I relate to this, too. We all want to be the girl in our dreams... or make her real. It's in writing that we can create that perfect ideal, I think.
Great poem. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Tina]

Wow, I get that .. very good

[Anaya]

Thank you so much!