"Moonshadows..."

"Moonshadows..."

A Poem by Chris
"

...echoes of yesterday

"

"Moonshadows..."

...echoes of yesterday...

There are times I feel your fingertips
grazing my cheek...
and your lips are just right THERE

and mine move to find and mold to yours...
and I can feel your arms around me
and squeezing so tight...
and then for whatever reason
I become aware of where and when I am
and wish so hard - I hadn't.

Chris

© 2012 Chris


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Mmmm, those moments when the memory is so real, is it a dream, dare I open my eyes? Wanting to savor it for a moment longer...realization hits and I can almost hear the sigh...

For such a small write, it carries the weight of the world.



Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it, I hope you write more like this

Posted 8 Years Ago


nicely writen and lovely to read. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


regrets in beautiful words...Brilliant!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very poignant and breathes like the first breath of awakening from our most tender dream

Posted 8 Years Ago


It is hard to know if we are here or there, time twists, and life bites back,nocturnal
omission, the truth of the dark, erasing the young at the reunion...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Powerful. I love word choice and the physical feelings you are portraying. Wonderful! I love your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Heart-breaking.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Took my emotion to a new level, as you always do...
The enhancement of certain words is something you carry through all your poetry, simply renders me humbled to read your thoughts xoxo

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KristynRuth

8 Years Ago

I was just about to post the same thing, I feel honored just to have read this.
The yearning is portrayed so beautifully even wrapped in sadness. You are such a gorgeous poet!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Lansing, MI



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