"Dreams And..."

"Dreams And..."

A Poem by Chris
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yes

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"Dreams And..."
Seems we live in the starlight,
and dream as we follow the sunlight -
eyes and breath drawn to
golden warmth and filling mellow heat
that holds all that we are,
were,
will be...
as I's meld into we's
and we's melt into
us...
and our taste IS
the breath we exhale,
and our thoughts are 
the flow of senses
and woven nows
that blend existence into futures past
and presents that become...
dreams and...
me's.
Chris

© 2016 Chris


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Chris,
Boy this would be pretty sang with a guitar. I love the warmth of the sun and how it brings out contrasting colors and creatures out of hiding. All of humankind has always had a love of nature and it's freedom in common. Love this! ...................kathy

Posted 5 Years Ago


dear Chris... to discover your charming
poem is a delight to my soul. As we age
our memories become our present and our future
seems like a dream that may come true.
I love your unique poetry. truly, Pat

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Extremely uplifting and befitting dreamers throughout.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Chris

5 Years Ago

I appreciate your thought... thank you
I really enjoyed this write, This is a wonderful write full of emotion

Posted 5 Years Ago


Chris

5 Years Ago

Thank you for pausing with me... and good morning
Karmee

5 Years Ago

good morning to you too, hope you have a lovely day :)
Chris

5 Years Ago

...and you as well.
The only way to describe this is intoxicating. So beautiful how the words just flow seamlessly just like magic. There's a certain soft urgency in these lines met by a melodic taste.

"as I's meld into we's
and we's melt into
us..." This gives such a beautiful image; a pen writing over an 'I', turning it into a 'we'; two friends conversing, and their hands suddenly meet.

What a treat this is.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Chris

5 Years Ago

It was nice to have you "pause" with me and to know you ...listened.
Sometimes it is my dreams that get me through the day. We can't escape reality but we can soften the edges. Beautifully written, mesmerizing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


a beautiful dream ..especially enjoyed the feeling of warm chasing ol' sol through the day .. its been raining here for 3 days and today the sun finally broke through :) ..so appreciate .. enjoyed reading this romantic poem ..its the way things should be eh!?
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


What would I do without Chris, the poetic dreamer?


Posted 5 Years Ago


Good to hear from you, again, Chris


Posted 5 Years Ago


Such a beautiful flow of words...I'm speechless.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Chris

5 Years Ago

It's good "seeing" you again, I hope things are going well for you...
Dean

5 Years Ago

Thanks Chris---good to keep in touch

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Lansing, MI



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